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Today children are come across more pressure from academic social and comecial defficulties

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Today
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 face various problems
due to
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This
 essay was written to prevent coercion on children . I want kids to be away from that kind of duress Children have academic problems. Parents want their children to be educated. In
this
 rule of
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 pressure appears in young. They want to buy other things on the phone but get stressed if They can't get them When
teenager
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 are under stress parents and teachers should be able to guide them carefully and understand that they can't always win and admit defeat. In
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conclusion
 these pressures on
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 must be removed
otherwise
 it will the physical and mental development of
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