The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
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The given line graph illustrates the amount of questionnaire which was provided to travel
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in 3 different ways in one area for 6 months in 2011. In brief, the number of questions in person and by telephone gradually increased,
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there was a slight fall in the
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of letters and emails asking something. Moving to the detail, In January calling is the most common type of enquiry at 1000,
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it fluctuated between 800 and 1000 from January to April. After that, there was a slight rise from 1000 to 1600 or 2 months.
In addition
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, in January asking in person was the
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position,
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, it soared up to approximately 2000 in June. Before March, it overtook the letter, and after March it surpassed the phone question.
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, the letter was in the second highest position at 800,
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there was a stabilization at 800, and it slightly declined from 800 to 400 for 4 months.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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