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Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

#people #thirties #children #development
Presently, most
of
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the
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people
 do not want to get married and have
children
 in order to create
the
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 career till
thier
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their
 thirties. I am completely certain that first of all, every human being should create
thier
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their
 own
life
 before they get married and have
children
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss why numerous
people
 do not desire to get married and have
children
 until their thirties and provide relevant examples from my experience. Nowadays majority of the young
people
 want to study
famous
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 universities and find well-paid work. They never think about getting married and
have
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children
 until their thirties. Indeed, today it is difficult to live without money and
house
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although
 they are professional staff in
the
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life
.
Therefore
 most
of
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the
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people
 find well-paid jobs so as not to find
difficult
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it difficult
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 to live.
For example
, there was my
neighbors
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 lived next to me. They had a single son. He worked and studied abroad because they were poor. He sometimes came home to see his parents and give
some
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 money.
Finally
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 he got married after he had created his own
life
. Now he lives with his family happily.
However
, some
of
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the
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people
 get married early age in order to have
children
although
 they do not have
their
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 home to live
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and
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 a job.
As a
result
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 they find it difficult to live with their family.
For instance
, I had my cousin. He was a single son to his parents. One day his parents wanted him to get married early. After two years he divorced with wife in order to
be
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lack
of
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experience in
life
.
Hence
, every young person should get married unless they achi
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • matrimonial timing
  • fertility issues
  • career-oriented
  • financial security
  • societal norms
  • generational divide
  • personal fulfillment
  • personality development
  • biological clock
  • extended adolescence
  • family planning
  • child rearing
  • socioeconomic factors
  • traditional milestones
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