Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.

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Dear Navid, I've just received the photo you sent to me. I want to thank you on behalf of my family for the time we stayed in your place. The trip was thoroughly memorable, and what made it even more fun is that our children have become friends. I

also

want to thank you for the photos. They are wonderful. I want to frame them and hang them on the wall. I want to apologize for not writing to you in the past week. Unfortunately, Jalal had a fever

last

week and we were really busy because of him. The doctor examined him and assured us that it isn't something serious. Thank god he's better now.

Lastly

, I want some fascinating news with you. Next week is my son's birthday and we want to hold a birthday party for him. I would be really glad if you and your family manage to come. I think Jalal and Majid would have a great time together, and we can have fun as well. I hope to see you

then

. Best regards, Amir

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri May 19 2023

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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Thank them for the photos and for the holiday Explain why you don't write earlier Invite them to como and stay with you.

pie chart and table about fish imported and source in the US

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