you are going on a short course to a training college abroad. it is college that you have not been to before write a letter to the accomodation officer in your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date, explain your accomodation needs, ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accomodation #officer #departure #date #information

Dear Mr Jones, I am just enrolled in the computer programming course. The course is comprised of empirical work

as well as

theoretical subjects. My course will start on September 21, so if it is possible, I will check in on September 20. I need accommodation for a period of six months because I will spend the rest of the year in my brother's apartment. In case it is possible, I need a room in the International Hall as the students there are more mature.

Also

, I will need a desk and a chair for studying. I heard that it is possible to arrange a warm meal, so I want to register for it if it is not a problem.

Lastly

, I want to ask you to provide information about the most convenient way to come back to the dorm from the college. Please tell me whether there are bus stops or subway stations nearby. If not, can you send me the local taxi's phone number? sincerely yours, Amir Ghasemi

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri May 19 2023

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