In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

academy plays an important role in the
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development of children. Young minds learn
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environment. Children develop their social, physical and emotional skills over here. During
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some of
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started facing issues with their social skills
as a result
of
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they started having problems with student behaviour.
Firstly
, some of the students have issues with their
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.
For instance
, they do not know how to express their emotions and thoughts in front of anyone.
Secondly
, some
kids
are not obedient and punctual
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in
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class.
For example
, if the teacher gives them
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assignment or project to work on they could not complete it on time or they do not do the homework at all. There can be solutions for
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of behaviours as they are young
kids
and it is their
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learning
age. Foremost
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educators can work on the social and emotional domain of
kids
so they can get more comfortable to show their true emotions and thoughts to the other
kids
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they will have more comfort zone with them.
For example
,
schools
can organize fun activities like food truck picnics in which they can have joy with their friends, educators and
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family
all together and will build more strong relationships and will express
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.
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, the
schools
should start
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the
kids
with good behaviour so the other
kids
can
also
get inspired.
For example
, the
schools
can give small appreciation gifts like books, pens
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etcetera
, if a child is showing punctuality and
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. In conclusion, student behaviour plays a very significant role in the early years of a kid's age so it's the responsibility of the
schools
and parents together to take the necessary steps to make them more socially capable so that the future
kids
will have bright future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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