Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as tow thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The number of overweight young individuals growing in size nowadays become a serious social issue not only in Australia but in many regions around the world.

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some consider it as the obligation of individuals, I strongly agree that educational institutions play essential roles to help young people remain their weight at a healthy standard.

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with, overloading sugar and salt on a daily basis are one of the cogent causes of obesity,

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lack of exercise.

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phenomena could lead to various chronic diseases, including diabetes and cardiovascular diseases,

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it, some negative impacts on respiratory systems. On the one hand, parents have a great influence on their children at an early age, which could foster

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good eating habits and active lifestyles in the young age groups.

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, a large number of double-income families nowadays reduce the time they spent on their children to ensure

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follow balanced diets and have sufficient outdoor activities.

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, there are various methods for educational institutions to tackle

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problems. First of all, schools are able to provide healthy meals with sufficient nutrition and low calories to cultivate the younger generation with healthy eating habits.

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, in the majority of secondary schools in Taiwan, it is compulsory for students to eat lunch arranged by professional nutritionists to deter them from eating fast food.

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, educators could throw many events to encourage teenagers to form a regular exercise routine, including sports competitions and marathons.

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, many schools in the USA are together holding national sports competitions annually, which attract thousands and millions of young participants.  To summarise, it is essential for family members to keep an eye on their children to intake more real food and less processed products.

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, I am in favour of depending on authorities to reduce the number of young people who suffer from

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