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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, medical technologies and healthcare
methods
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 have improved drastically.
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,
people
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's
health
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 issues were rarely healed, and now healing become possible which increased
people
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's life spans notably. Despite having a couple of
disadvantages
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, I believe that the positive outcomes of medical
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 surpassed the negatives.
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 essay discusses both sides and
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, I will provide my personal opinion.  On the
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 hand, the
disadvantages
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 of the recent
methods
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 of
health
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care
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 revolve around two main aspects.
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considering the fact that
this
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 development is a recent
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, it is limited in availability.
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, they do not exist in every country.
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,
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 of the new and limited technologies of body scanning is the open MRI scan, which is designed for
people
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 who are afraid of closed spaces and those who are overweight.
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,
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methods
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 of
health
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care
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 on top of not being available everywhere, cost a considerable amount of money which makes it the second disadvantage.
On the other hand
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, the advantages of improved medical
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 are significant and worth the trouble.
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 of the main ones is its effects on
health
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, as it contributes to a precise diagnosis of multiple diseases, which
thus
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, assists in dealing with them properly.
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, the developed devices that examine brain injuries can discover the smallest problems in the brain, which saved many
people
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 from great consequences. Another advantage is that with the progression of technologies,
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medical devices become designed to suit
people
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 of different ages, sizes and genders.
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, these approaches to medical
care
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 assisted in rising
people
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's expectations of living longer and healthier lives.
To sum up
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, despite the
disadvantages
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 of improved medical
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, the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages
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. As these
methods
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 have positive outcomes on
people
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's
health
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 and
lives
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 safety, I believe that no matter what the costs are,
people
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's lives are much more valuable than anything else.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • medical advancements
  • workforce
  • wisdom
  • overpopulation
  • resource strain
  • aging population
  • healthcare costs
  • multigenerational
  • lifelong learning
  • retirement planning
  • pension systems
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  • generational divide
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