The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The graph below illustrates the
number
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of
visitors
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to a Caribbean
Island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of tourists staying both on the
cruise
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ship
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and on the
island
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gradually increased throughout the period. In 2010 the total
number
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of
visitors
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was 1
million
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. About 250,000 of these stayed on the
cruise
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ship
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while
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750000 stayed on the
island
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. In 2013, staying on the
cruise
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ship
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became popular
thus
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experiencing a steady increase from half a
million
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to two
million
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in 2017.
On the other hand
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,
visitors
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staying on the
Island
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slightly increased from 750,000 in 2011 to 1.5
million
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in 2013.
This
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number
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remained constant for the next 3 years before experiencing a slight fall in 2016. It is
also
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shown that the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased from 1
million
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in 2010 to just over 2.5
million
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in 2015. Between 2015 and 2016, the
number
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of
visitors
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remained the same for a year with the same
number
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of tourists staying on the
island
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and
cruise
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ship
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.
However
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, the sum changed dramatically reaching its highest peak of 3.5
million
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visitors
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in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, cruise, ship, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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