The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The graph below illustrates the
number
of
visitors
to a Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of tourists staying both on the
cruise
ship
and on the
island
gradually increased throughout the period. In 2010 the total
number
of
visitors
was 1
million
. About 250,000 of these stayed on the
cruise
ship
while
750000 stayed on the
island
. In 2013, staying on the
cruise
ship
became popular
thus
experiencing a steady increase from half a
million
to two
million
in 2017.
On the other hand
,
visitors
staying on the
Island
slightly increased from 750,000 in 2011 to 1.5
million
in 2013.
This
number
remained constant for the next 3 years before experiencing a slight fall in 2016. It is
also
shown that the total
number
of
visitors
increased from 1
million
in 2010 to just over 2.5
million
in 2015. Between 2015 and 2016, the
number
of
visitors
remained the same for a year with the same
number
of tourists staying on the
island
and
cruise
ship
.
However
, the sum changed dramatically reaching its highest peak of 3.5
million
visitors
in 2017.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, cruise, ship, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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