The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The line chart details the frequency of
requests
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in person, by letter/email, and by
phone
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a phone
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call at a UK tourist office in the first six months of a given year. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that in-person appeal increased from the least to most common over the period, overtaking the phone, which
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rose. Information demand by email and letter was reduced and was by far the least frequent by the end of the time surveyed. In January, in-person information
requests
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were the lowest of all three categories at approximately 420.
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, round-robin and telephone calls stood at 770 and 900 turns. By mid-March, in-person questions (1,000) had surpassed other queries, an upwards trend that persisted and culminated at 1,900 to finish the period. In comparison, phone inquiries fluctuated between 800 and 1,000 until the beginning of April before growing sharply to end just behind in-person
requests
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at 1,600. Letter and email
requests
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fell marginally until March (to 700) before a steep drop and a levelling off at 400 from May to June.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words requests with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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