The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following graph chart illustrates the
time
Australian parents invested in helping their offspring in four different activities in 2013.
It seems that mothers
spent most of their time
on
dressing their kids and helping them with their homework which took approximately 75% and 60% of their Change preposition
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time
respectively. They, next,
put just above 40% of their time
preparing the children for bed,
and spent the least amount of Remove the comma
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time
on
playing with them.
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On the other hand
, fathers
did not spend much time
with their children. Interestingly, the highest amount time
they spent with their kids was aiding them with homework which only accounts for 10% of their Change preposition
of time
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.
All things considered, when mothers
and fathers
joined forces, they spent much more quality time
with their sons and daughters. Seemingly, mothers
and fathers
chose to spend 70% of their time
playing with their kids, an amount that is
almost three times and fifteen times more than the time
mothers
and fathers
spent seperately
in turn.Correct your spelling
separately
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