The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following graph chart illustrates the
time
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Australian parents invested in helping their offspring in four different activities in 2013. It seems that
mothers
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spent most of their
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dressing their kids and helping them with their homework which took approximately 75% and 60% of their
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respectively. They,
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put just above 40% of their
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preparing the children for bed
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and spent the least amount of
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playing with them.
On the other hand
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,
fathers
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did not spend much
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with their children. Interestingly, the highest amount
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they spent with their kids was aiding them with homework which only accounts for 10% of their
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. All things considered, when
mothers
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and
fathers
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joined forces, they spent much more quality
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with their sons and daughters. Seemingly,
mothers
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and
fathers
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chose to spend 70% of their
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playing with their kids, an amount
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almost three times and fifteen times more than the
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mothers
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and
fathers
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spent
seperately
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separately
in turn.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, mothers, fathers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • time spent
  • Australian mothers
  • fathers
  • helping
  • children
  • activities
  • reading
  • homework
  • playing sports
  • general play
  • comparison
  • 2013
  • significantly
  • difference
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