Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Madhur Bathla! I am writing

this

letter with reference to my luggage which I forgot to pick up after deboarding the train. I was travelling from Goa to Delhi by "Shatabdi Express" with four suitcases and one briefcase.

Furthermore

, when I reached Delhi, I left the train with the four suitcases and missed pick-up my camouflage-coloured bag, which later remained in the train compartment itself. It is a small-size camouflage colour briefcase, and your team would be able to spot it easily, because of the unique colour identity followed by a sticker of an Indian Cricketer "Virat Kohli" stuck on one side of the bag. I would request you to sincerely get it collected and keep it to yourself. Meanwhile, I will ask my office delivery boy to travel towards the railway station location, he will

then

pick up the baggage.

However

, in the case of identification, you can ask him as many questions as required before handing the package. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Madhur Bathla

Submitted by madhur.bathla on Sat May 20 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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