The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
The following table compares the information on popular
pastime
activities among the 30 to 50 years old people of 8 different nations.
Evidently, the most popular pastime
of Canadians, Americans and Australians is watching television with the two North American countries
both standing at 60% and Australia at 65%. However
, the countries
of Korea and China dedicate a mere 22% and 15% time to televised programs, respectively. Instead
, the two Asian countries
tend to be most engaged in reading with a solid 60% enthusiasm with Japan surpassing them in this
activity by two per cent.
Interestingly, sleep seems to be an on-demand pastime
in the UK with a 20% popularity. Whereas
, in other countries
, this
percentage amounts to below 10%.
Music also
appears to be a favourite pastime
activity in America, while
being of zero interest to the Chinese and less popular in other countries
. Sports seems to be a common pastime
among
all Change preposition
in
countries
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