Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this case? What is the most important thing to success in life?

Well , it is a true fact that if
people
try something in their
life
then
they definitely fail once or twice in the same field,
however
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the question is that the person should end up their
life
over there or be continuous in it as it is part of over
life
.
Therefore
, I personally believe that there is a number of reason behind
this
trend as the new generation are too lazy and never leave their comfort level and in
this
,essay I will briefly explain the reason and essential thing to
success
in
life
. To commence with the first and foremost point that it is a psychological fact that whatever individuals try in their
life
, they surely face one failure.Needless to say , some learn from their mistakes and few are losers who easily give up and sit free at home with a number of disappointments in their mind .
Therefore
, students sometimes have less interest in that field which they choose under the pressure of their parents and as a
,
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result they are unable to make their cancer the same category . so , they give up
at the end
.
Moreover
, nowadays there are a number of disturbances present in their around
such
as , peer pressure, gadget notification and many others that easily take a person's attention.
Hence
, by ,
this
all
people
cannot focus on their particular work. Despite these cases , there are ample plan and a way to get
success
there ,
nonetheless
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success
also
need lots of hard work in effective ways .
Firstly
,
people
have to make the proper plan and follow it in a proper way with hard work,
consequently
,
people
can get
success
in their
life
at an early age .
Apart from
this
,
people
have to change their way of things and look towards the world to get
success
in
this
era
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if
people
try something different to the world
then
they have to change their attitude and must have the confidence to face the
people
who stand against it.
For example
, Albert Einstein is a very popular scientist and very well but he was rejected by all the schools which
was
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located in the country ,at ,
last
his Mother's taught him at home as he has a huge interest in science and mathematics.
Thus
, he becomes
success
person all around the world in their personal and professional career. In conclusion ,
although
success
plays widely role in everyone's
life
,
nonetheless
people
have to be enough strong to handle the situations and
people
view those
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against their careers .
Additionally
, they should learn something from their mistake rather than give up.
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