The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line

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graph

compares the production of different products in a

garmant

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garment

factory between 1990 and 2010.

Overall

, the suit had been produced the most in 1990

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but became second place in 2010.

Suit

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The suit

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was produced the most in

garment

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a garment

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factory in 1990.

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from less than 15

million

, and increased

dramaticlly

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dramatically

before

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the peak of 23

millions

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production in 1995. 1995

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year

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experienced a steady fall, which returned to just over 15

million

in 2005.

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there was a reverse in 2010, it became the second largest amount in 2010, with 20

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million

. In general, coats

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the upwards since 1990, with less than 10

million

. From 1990 to 2005, there was a considerable rise, and the number of coats is over than suits in 2005 and, which is made up more than 20

million

. The factory produced the second highest amount of merchandise in 1990 was dresses(10

million

). From 1990 to 2005,

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dress production experienced a

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, followed by a slight increase in 2010, with 15

million

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The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010

With internet improvement people can & opinions on certain goods or service that they purchased. Is this good or bad thing?.

Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business. why do you think that is? what could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts?