The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
grapgh
Correct your spelling
graph
compares the production of different products in a
garmant
Correct your spelling
garment
factory between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the suit had been produced the most in 1990
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
but became second place in 2010.
Suit
Add an article
The suit
show examples
was produced the most in
garment
Add an article
a garment
show examples
factory in 1990.
Beginning
Wrong verb form
Began
show examples
from less than 15
million
, and increased
dramaticlly
Correct your spelling
dramatically
before
reached
Wrong verb form
reaching
show examples
the peak of 23
millions
Change to singular
million
show examples
production in 1995. 1995
yaer
Correct your spelling
year
years
experienced a steady fall, which returned to just over 15
million
in 2005.
Although
there was a reverse in 2010, it became the second largest amount in 2010, with 20
milliom
Correct your spelling
million
. In general, coats
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
show examples
the upwards since 1990, with less than 10
million
. From 1990 to 2005, there was a considerable rise, and the number of coats is over than suits in 2005 and, which is made up more than 20
million
. The factory produced the second highest amount of merchandise in 1990 was dresses(10
million
). From 1990 to 2005,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
dress production experienced a
fluctuate
Replace the word
fluctuation
show examples
, followed by a slight increase in 2010, with 15
million
.
Submitted by zhangyongc83 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: