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Increasing number of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved. What are the drawbacks?

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In the
last
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 few years, the number of
students
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 who prefer to study abroad is increasing,
specially
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 in some countries like China or India
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 own a very high population, or even a
country
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 called Iran where
people
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 suffer to live in there because of their bad economical situation.
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 and
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 involved countries with some drawbacks that include
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each side.
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, studying abroad requires a strong academic background. Only
people
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can
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who can
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 get permission to study in
another
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country
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 who are at
high level
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inn
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 terms of literacy,
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that
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 is why
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are constantly trying to improve themselves in their major.
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, a person who intends to immigrate will find a higher academic level than a person who studies unmotivated and can achieve more
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 for her future,
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 as a better job and better income.
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, countries that
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 more requests to attract foreign
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, accept the best
students
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 in all fields or any skill.
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 will cause deserving
people
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enter
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 that
country
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, settle there, find work after
graduations
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graduation
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 and contribute to the development of that
country
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 in many different sectors; which is more like if a farmer buys
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land in a good climate area or a dry and salty area, it is definitely more likely to produce a crop in a good climate, even if more money is spent on it.
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, studying abroad may cause
some
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 bad influence
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 foreign
students
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. They have to leave their families, their cultures, their friends and
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 their own
country
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 which may even involve them with depression or even cause them to get injured mentally in the middle of their studies to
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 an extent that they return to their own
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 so they just wasted their time and have
start
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 from the beginning.
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people
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 who have strong emotional
attachment
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attachments
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 to their families and friends.
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, with the increase in
number
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a number
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 of foreign
students
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 to study,
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then
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and then
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 stay and work in the involved
country
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, less space is
crated
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created
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 for the
people
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 of that
country
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 in terms of education and employment;
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 issue causes
people
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 to protest and riot in that
country
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, which disturbs the order and safety there,
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 in Iran with increasing the number of Afghan
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 in there, Iranian
people
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 that they are staling job opportunities and should return to their
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.
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, as I consider despite the difficulties and problems that may arise for a student by studying abroad, if that student does his best, he can achieve better living conditions than before.
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,
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good progress was made for the involved
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,
while
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 it doesn’t matter whether the person who made the progress is a foreigner or citizen, the progress of a society helps the all
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of
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there.
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