Increasing number of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved. What are the drawbacks?
In the
last
few years, the number of students
who prefer to study abroad is increasing, specially
in some countries like China or India Replace the word
especially
that
own a very high population, or even a Correct pronoun usage
which
country
called Iran where people
suffer to live in there because of their bad economical situation. This
essay will discuss how beneficial is studying abroad for students
and also
involved countries with some drawbacks that include for
each side.
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Firstly
, studying abroad requires a strong academic background. Only people
can
get permission to study in Correct pronoun usage
who can
another
Correct determiner usage
a
country
who are at high level
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high-level
inn
terms of literacy, Correct your spelling
in
that
is why Correct pronoun usage
which
they
are constantly trying to improve themselves in their major. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
, a person who intends to immigrate will find a higher academic level than a person who studies unmotivated and can achieve more ideal
for her future, Fix the agreement mistake
ideals
such
as a better job and better income. Secondly
, countries that makes
more requests to attract foreign Change the verb form
make
students
, accept the best students
in all fields or any skill. This
will cause deserving people
enter
that Add the particle
to enter
country
, settle there, find work after graduations
and contribute to the development of that Fix the agreement mistake
graduation
country
in many different sectors; which is more like if a farmer buys a
land in a good climate area or a dry and salty area, it is definitely more likely to produce a crop in a good climate, even if more money is spent on it.
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Nevertheless
, studying abroad may cause some
bad influence Correct determiner usage
a
in
foreign Change preposition
on
students
. They have to leave their families, their cultures, their friends and also
their own country
which may even involve them with depression or even cause them to get injured mentally in the middle of their studies to such
an extent that they return to their own country
so they just wasted their time and have start
from the beginning. Change the form of the verb
started
This
example is seen more in people
who have strong emotional attachment
to their families and friends. Fix the agreement mistake
attachments
Moreover
, with the increase in number
of foreign Change the article
a number
the number
students
to study, then
stay and work in the involved Correct word choice
and then
country
, less space is crated
for the Correct your spelling
created
people
of that country
in terms of education and employment; this
issue causes people
to protest and riot in that country
, which disturbs the order and safety there, for example
in Iran with increasing the number of Afghan people
in there, Iranian people
that they are staling job opportunities and should return to their country
.
To conclude
, as I consider despite the difficulties and problems that may arise for a student by studying abroad, if that student does his best, he can achieve better living conditions than before. On the other hand
, a
good progress was made for the involved Correct article usage
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country
, while
it doesn’t matter whether the person who made the progress is a foreigner or citizen, the progress of a society helps the all people
of
there.Change preposition
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