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In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed their education and found jobs. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

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The increasing number of
adults
 who continue their
lives
 with their mom and dad occurs in some nations even though they have finished school and got a job.
This
 essay will illustrate the benefits and the drawbacks of
adults
 who live with their
parents
, and state why I personally believe that the positive impacts are greater for their
lives
. On the one hand, as an adult, they are demanded to live independently and staying with their
parents
 has a risk to crash in some aspects. After they finish their education and founds a job, they should be able to decide their
life
's purposes. Obviously, by living with their
parents
, they can not take a decision by themselves, and they have to adjust to their home parent's regulations. As for the results, they do not have an opportunity to learn how to deal with the problems.
On the other hand
, the
adults
 who have married
life
 and have children will get bigger benefits if they continue their
life
 with their
parents
.
Firstly
, the parent will help to look after their children with pleasure during a couple have to go to the workplace every day.
Secondly
, they
also
 get serenity because they are always close to their parent and ensure that they do not being lonely after they got married.
Therefore
, their
lives
 will be going easier. In sum,
although
 living independently is a good opportunity for adulthood, living with
parents
 will make our
lives
 easier. Eventually, both the
parents
 and their children who have been
adults
 are jubilant and their
life
 would be happier.
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