Some people say that the main environment problem of our times is the loss of particular species od plants and animals. Other say that there is more important environmental problem

A highly controversial issue relates to
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problem
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in
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these day
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. It sparked a debate on
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the loss
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of particular
species
of
plants
and
animals
or other important problems. We will be examining
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both point of view in
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To begin
with, many families of
plants
and
animals
have the threat of extinction.
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time scientists found that their contribution to
environment
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was overlooked, and at
present
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we realized their needs was necessary for the
eco system
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of our planet.
For instance
, some worms are
curcial
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crucial
for
health
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of our soil.
Whereas
,
wrong
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practise
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to kill them resulted in poor soil quality and eventually lower productivity of crops. From
this
angle, many people argue that to save our Earth we need to understand the importance
securing
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habitat
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the habitat
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of lost
species
of
plants
and
animals
. On the other side, some
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or people try to convince for focusing on
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the plantation
a plantation
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plantation
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plantations
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to tackle the
overall
issue of our environment. These intellectuals try to convey that
instead
of focusing on
certian
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certain
type
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types
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of
plant
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plants
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and
animals
, we can put our attention on
plantation
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plantations
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to bring a noticeable change to our global warming tension. In their opinion, it would have
bigger
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impact on our weather as compared to the efforts we put in.
On the other hand
, the
energies
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and time we invest in
survival
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the survival
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of certain
species
is more than the benefit gained from it.
Therefore
, for
timely
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and
result oriented
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approach we may get together on
plantation
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the plantation
a plantation
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to bring a positive change to
enviromental
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environmental
issues.
To sum up
, saving
species
of
plants
and
animals
and other issues of
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enviroment
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environment
both are crucial.
However
,
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practical and targeting quick
result
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results
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we can focus on
plantation
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the plantation
a plantation
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to save our planet from
climate
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the climate
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crisis.
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