Some people say that the main environment problem of our times is the loss of particular species od plants and animals. Other say that there is more important environmental problem

A highly controversial issue relates to

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problem

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in

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these day

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. It sparked a debate on

loss

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the loss

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of particular

species

of

plants

and

animals

or other important problems. We will be examining

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both point of view in

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essay.

To begin

with, many families of

plants

and

animals

have the threat of extinction.

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time scientists found that their contribution to

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was overlooked, and at

present

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we realized their needs was necessary for the

eco system

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of our planet.

For instance

, some worms are

curcial

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crucial

for

health

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the health

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of our soil.

Whereas

,

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practise

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to kill them resulted in poor soil quality and eventually lower productivity of crops. From

this

angle, many people argue that to save our Earth we need to understand the importance

securing

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of securing

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habitat

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the habitat

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of lost

species

of

plants

and

animals

. On the other side, some

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groups

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or people try to convince for focusing on

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the plantation

a plantation

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plantation

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plantations

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to tackle the

overall

issue of our environment. These intellectuals try to convey that

instead

of focusing on

certian

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certain

type

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types

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of

plant

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plants

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and

animals

, we can put our attention on

plantation

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plantations

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to bring a noticeable change to our global warming tension. In their opinion, it would have

bigger

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impact on our weather as compared to the efforts we put in.

On the other hand

, the

energies

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energy

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and time we invest in

survival

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the survival

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of certain

species

is more than the benefit gained from it.

Therefore

, for

timely

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and

result oriented

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approach we may get together on

plantation

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the plantation

a plantation

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to bring a positive change to

enviromental

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environmental

issues.

To sum up

, saving

species

of

plants

and

animals

and other issues of

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enviroment

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environment

both are crucial.

However

,

being

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practical and targeting quick

result

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results

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we can focus on

plantation

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the plantation

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to save our planet from

climate

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the climate

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crisis.