The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.
The given chart gives information about how many percentages of components of the Gross Domestic Product from the IT and Service Industry of the UK in the years 1992 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of GDP, but IT remained at a higher rate over the
period
. At the beginning of the
period
, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per
cent
of GDP,
whereas
IT exceeded
this
, at just over 6 per
cent
. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with components were 6 % and just over 8% respectively.It was higher by approximately 1 per
cent
overall
, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.
However
, over the following four years, generally, there was a significant difference between the two components. The percentage of GDP from IT increased quite dramatically to 12% in 1998 and
at the end
of the
period
, it reached nearly 15%,
while
the Service Industry stayed nearly the same, increasing to only a bit more than 8 per
cent
at the end
of the
period
.
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