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Some people prefer to live with a roommate. Others prefer to live alone. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two options do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer

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Although
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 some individuals like living with
roommates
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 rather than living alone,
others
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 prefer to live by themselves. There are many benefits of living alone
such
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 as having privacy and avoiding a lot of roommate issues,
however
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, Living in a
share
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 house has advantages like reducing depression and reducing daily expenses. I prefer to live with
roommates
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 to live alone.
To begin
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 with, living with
roommates
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. Because
life
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 is hard and it
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 of a lot of challengings, many people prefer to surround themselves with loved ones and have them as
roommates
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 which ends up reducing depression. If someone lived with
roommates
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, he would be able to
share
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 his problems with
others
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instead
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 of keeping them to himself.
Furthermore
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 living with
roommates
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 decreases the daily expenses as they can
share
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 financial house expenses.
For example
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, I live in a shared apartment and I
share
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 groceries with my
roommates
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.
To sum up
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, Living with
others
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 makes
life
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 easier as it reduces stress and saves money as well.
on the other hand
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, some people claim that living alone makes you manage your
life
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 easier and guarantees you privacy because many individuals are so curious about other's
life
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 and
also
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 they have violated
others
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' privacy.
in addition
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, living by yourself makes you avoid roommate problems
such
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 as noise and cleaning issues.
for example
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, My friend used to live with
roommates
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 but now she has been living alone and she is very glad as she feels that she controls her
life
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 freely with no issues.
To sum up
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, Living alone helps you to live in peace and eases your
life
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. In conclusion, Living alone or with
roommates
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 have many benefits,
thus
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 a person should choose which option suits his
life
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. For me, I love to be surrounded by
roommates
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 to live and face the world alone which makes me comfortable.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • companionship
  • alleviate
  • cost-sharing
  • economical
  • shared responsibilities
  • household management
  • privacy
  • independence
  • control
  • solitude
  • recharge
  • personal environment
  • focus
  • cleanliness standards
  • negotiate
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