The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line graph illustrates the
number
of stores
which new opening and closing in the same region during the 7 years.
Overall
, according to
these data, the number
of shops
which closed is higher than the new shop opening in the period of the question except in 2011 and 2015. moreover
, there is the highest trend in 2011 for opening shops
while
the lowest number
of closing shops
in 2015.
It is clear that
the number
of stores
that blocked were was between 6000 and 7000 from 2011 until 2014. after which it was a sharp decline in 2015 and it stood at just less than 1000. then
, there was significant growth until 2016 with 5000 stores
. Moreover
, the statistics of them remained at about 5000 stores
until the end of the period.
in addition
, the number
of new opening stores
decline marginally in 2012. after which it was a slight rise and stood near the number
of closing shops
in 2014 at about 6000.In 2015, it dropped again to about 2000 which stood at the statistics of them in 2012. it stabled about 4000 numbers until 2017. it was the lowest number
in 2018 with 3000 new opening shops
.Submitted by amirhsina on
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