The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present.

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space in 1986 and today.

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, there are some modifications including the addition and renovation of several facilities and infrastructures. Looking into the details, in 1986, River Stroke stretches from the northern area with the small bridge to the southern field of the map, and it is unchanged at the present. There were several housing, shops, post office, and farmland between the river and small paths. On the other side of the small paths which was in the east area of the map, there was housing, a primary school, farmland, and a garden with a large house inside. Nowadays, the housing area is enlarged along the small paths and the shops are replaced with the housing

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the post office is situated in the same location.

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, two small buildings are erected on the side of the primary school building is erected. A small part of the garden is removed and it has functioned as a housing whilst the big house inside is made into a retirement home. All of the farmland is removed.

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The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present.

Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

9. People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than those who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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