Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In
this
modern’s era,
children
nowadays
use
a
smartphone
to help their daily
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, including education and entertainment for them.
Although
using a
smartphone
can support their
school
, I believe it could lead to a negative development since they do not have enough
skill
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a time-management. First of all, the pupil
are
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educated by their
school
to learn about the technology which they will
use
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thorough
of
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learning.
Moreover
, some
children
more
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advance
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technology,
such
as
smartphone
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than older people. Some schools allow the student to
use
their
smartphone
during the class to help them in
learning
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process.
For example
, in Jakarta elementary
school
, the teacher
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an access for the pupil to access
internet
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via
smartphone
during the open-book exam which
help
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them to get
an information
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information
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.
On the other hand
, sometimes
children
do not know about the
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of using technology, particularly a
smartphone
owing to they are addicted
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social media.
In addition
, social media have a learning machine which
make
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them to be interested all the time by using it.
For instance
,
Instagram
is the application for sharing a picture or video which
it
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is interesting for
children
because there is no age-restricted currently. Even though they get
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access
of
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smartphone
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during
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school
, some of them
use
Instagram
during
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class
instead
of the appropriate app which relates
during
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the lesson.
To sum up
, some students get the approval of using their
smartphone
which
assist
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them
gaining
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knowledge in
a
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school
,
while
some of them operate their
smartphone
to take
advantages
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of using
Instagram
that not relates to their lesson. I believe it could make
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negative development since
Instagram
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app
have
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not applied
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age-restricted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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