Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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In
this
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modern’s era,
children
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nowadays
use
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a
smartphone
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to help their daily
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, including education and entertainment for them.
Although
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using a
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can support their
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, I believe it could lead to a negative development since they do not have enough
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to
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a time-management. First of all, the pupil
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educated by their
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to learn about the technology which they will
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thorough
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learning.
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more
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advance
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technology,
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than older people. Some schools allow the student to
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their
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during the class to help them in
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process.
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, in Jakarta elementary
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an access for the pupil to access
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via
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during the open-book exam which
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them to get
an information
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.
On the other hand
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, sometimes
children
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do not know about the
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of using technology, particularly a
smartphone
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owing to they are addicted
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social media.
In addition
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, social media have a learning machine which
make
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them to be interested all the time by using it.
For instance
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,
Instagram
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is the application for sharing a picture or video which
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is interesting for
children
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because there is no age-restricted currently. Even though they get
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access
of
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smartphone
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smartphones
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during
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school
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, some of them
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Instagram
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during
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class
instead
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of the appropriate app which relates
during
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the lesson.
To sum up
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, some students get the approval of using their
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which
assist
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them
gaining
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knowledge in
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school
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,
while
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some of them operate their
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to take
advantages
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of using
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that not relates to their lesson. I believe it could make
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negative development since
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the Instagram
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app
have
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not applied
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age-restricted.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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