IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age 5 or 6, right up until age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

#children #tests #exams #school #age #right
Nowadays, for educational processes, assessments play a significant role in testing
student
 outcomes after their relative grades. It is commonly argued that the frequency of
exams
 is increasing daily and pupils are required to participate in a variety of
exams
 from an early age. In my opinion, assessments are one of the critical features of better education.
Nevertheless
, if the
number
 of
exams
 is exceeded,
this
 can be harmful to the quality of learning progress in some of the schools. It is a fact that without understanding the main reasons behind
students
' failure in studying, it is impossible to support and increase their outcomes. From
this
 point of view ,
exams
 play a valuable and irreplaceable role in teaching and learning activities. Because of having
exams
,
students
 would study and memorize their subjects and it could improve their productivity in learning. In a modern educational era,
exams
 are gradually becoming more open types – not only taken with exam paper sheets but
also
students
 can inspire by books that examiners give them.
Thus
, having the proper type of
exams
 in the relevant interval is beneficial for
students
 and better education.
On the other hand
, sometimes schools gives more effort to increase the
number
 of
exams
instead
 of analyzing the result of previous
exams
 , and it could lead to stressful
student
 life.
For instance
, it is statistically proven that the
number
 of
exams
 during the academic week should not be more than twice. Because of increasing
exams
, a life of high credit became a vital part of every
student
. So, obviously, they start to memorize by heart their subjects.
To sum up
, it is impossible to imagine educational processes without testing
students
’ outcomes,
nevertheless
, the
number
 of
exams
 should not be exceeded the real need of
students
.
Although
 teachers and society can check and evaluate their children's educational abilities, I believe
exams
 are not an excellent method to consider a
student
's education level and efforts.
Submitted by thant2356zin on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: