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There is a problem with the road outside of your house. Write a letter to your local councillor. In your letter -Introduce yourself -Explain what the problem is -Tell the councillor what you would like to be done.

#road #house #councillor #-introduce #-explain #-tell
Dear Sir/Madam Hi, my name is Sampurna. I am a local resident in your area in Bandung. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you there are a lot of broken roads outside my house at Taman Kopo Indah 1. Because of that, I consider to let you know about some broken spots that could be some serious problems nowadays. As I wrote before, There were many huge wholes near my house. The first one is in front of my house there are 3 wholes, but there are not really dangerous.
Secondly
 is, on the field.
This
 location has a giant hole.
Finally
 is, on the main road. You have to emphasize
this
 position because
that is
 a source of traffic congestion. In conclusion, As a wise local councillor, I hope you give attention to your local resident's suggestions for repairing roads.
Last
 but not least, I would say big thanks for your attention. Good luck! Yours Faithfully, Sampurna
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