Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: •What topics would you like them to cover? •Why would it be interesting for students? •Ask questions about the arrangement

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter with regard to the International Student's Day ceremony. I have a number of suggestions to make the
event
more appealing to
students
.
To begin
with, It would be wonderful if the college authorities talk about the graduates who have achieved success in both sports and science.
Also
, human resources should be invited to increase awareness about the latest trends in the job market. I believe suggestions make the
event
more attractive for
students
because meeting figures who studied at
this
college and achieve success not grab the student's attention to the
event
, but
also
encourages them to study more.
Furthermore
, as many
students
want to acquire information about the best job opportunities for them, they find the
event
more exciting.
Lastly
, many
students
are not sure whether the
event
will be held in a community hall or the stadium. If you provide us with reliable information, I will be grateful. Yours faithfully Amir Ghasemi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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