Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: •What topics would you like them to cover? •Why would it be interesting for students? •Ask questions about the arrangement

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to the International Student's Day ceremony. I have a number of suggestions to make the

event

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more appealing to

students

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with, It would be wonderful if the college authorities talk about the graduates who have achieved success in both sports and science.

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, human resources should be invited to increase awareness about the latest trends in the job market. I believe suggestions make the

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more attractive for

students

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because meeting figures who studied at

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college and achieve success not grab the student's attention to the

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, but

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encourages them to study more.

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, as many

students

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want to acquire information about the best job opportunities for them, they find the

event

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more exciting.

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, many

students

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are not sure whether the

event

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will be held in a community hall or the stadium. If you provide us with reliable information, I will be grateful. Yours faithfully Amir Ghasemi

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: •What topics would you like them to cover? •Why would it be interesting for students? •Ask questions about the arrangement

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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