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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

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‏Artificial
intelligence
 is becoming popular in the world of driving .
this
 is
due to
development
 in technology and it should be seen as a positive
development
 because it will guide us on the road like a map and reduce accidents. Many people rely on artificial
intelligence
 because it is convenient for us ,because of its spread companies are competing in its
development
 ,on the only hand ,costs are reduced and access time is faster, in future ,companies it will as a strategic addition for people with special needs without a drive, example, Hyundai car hired scientists for assistance in the
development
 of artificial
intelligence
 in future soon.
On the other hand
, the use of directions in travel and collision prevention assistant with a camera in the back that makes us see everything
also
 helps beginners in driving
For example
, a recent study found a reduced number of accidents using artificial
intelligence
.
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