Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Nowadays, more and more people are trying to cope with using
animals
in laboratories for scientific purposes.
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However
, there are
also
individuals, who claim that
science
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development can be achieved only in
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of doing
experiments
on varied creatures. I will explain why it should be prevented by authorities and propose some alternatives.
To begin
, the government have to prone
animals
and consider any
experipents
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experiments
experience
as a crime. Science labours based on
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and murders regard to
animals
should be banned for moral principles as humanity have to respect varied forms of life and treat them respectfully to create a
piecefull
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peaceful
world. To prove, children, who have pets are less likely to be cruel in adulthood, which means that taking care of
animals
can have a positive
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affect
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on people There
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a
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alternative ways to aim
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without victims. People can make
experiments
on dead
animals
, or create theories do discoveries with predictions, as there is a lot of information in open space, which can be sufficient.
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, pupils at schools
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no more learn anatomy with frogs as there are a lot of illustrates, videos and information about them in books and
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the internet
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internet
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, which can
provides
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them with more
knowledges
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without killing someone. In conclusion,
experiments
with different creatures have to be put under restriction because of moral principles,
wereas
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where
scientists need to seek
another ways
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to test products and make
investigation
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,
for
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create theories and prove
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with
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using previous knowledge and
experiments
to achieve success.
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  • scientific breakthroughs
  • ethical concerns
  • alternatives
  • animal testing
  • moral implications
  • ethical considerations
  • vivisection
  • research methods
  • ethical dilemmas
  • animal welfare
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