Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

Exercise 1 - Task One Pineapple exports

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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The bar graph illustrates the pineapple
exports
in the world in 2009 and 2009 by the main three producing countries,
while
the pie chart has an analysis of the components of the
cost
of each pineapple in 2019.
Overall
, the exportation doubled between 2009 and 2019, and
it is clear that
in 2019 the main
cost
is related to distribution and retail. Regarding the amount of
exports
, the graphic shows that Country A has a
substantially
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increase from 1 metric tonne in 2009 to more than 10 in 2019,
while
for
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Country B dropped to almost a quarter of the
exports
in 2009 with less than 2 metric tonnes in 2019.
On the other hand
, Country C
,
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doubled their
exports
between 2009 and 2019 from around/approximately a quarter to a half metric tonne. As can be seen from the pie chart, in 2019 the main consumer
cost
was distribution and retail, with more than a third of the total expense, In second place was profit with 18%, followed by taxes which was 16%.
On the other hand
, the producer
cost
is just 5%
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