The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.
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The pie charts compare the proportion of the main reasons for
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usage by teenagers, as
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of a survey performed between 2016 and 2019 in one African nation.
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, the proportionally ranking during the years remained stable, with
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calls as the least important reason for using mobile phones and
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social networks as the most important. one On the one hand, the pie charts illustrate that the
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calls as a purpose for using phones had a considerable fall, from 10% in 2016 to 5% in 2019,
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the digital camera percentage remained steady from 2016 to 2017, at 15%, and
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grew
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20% in 2019.
On the other hand
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, email and social network percentages had a similar slight decrease from 2017 to 2019, where email fell by 1% and
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calls by 2%.
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, after that dip,
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calls rose from 48% in 2017 to 51% in 2018 and
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continued its upward trend in the next year to reach 56% in 201.
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, email had a significant fall from 24% in 2017 to 20% in 2018, and
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continued decreasing gradually to reach 19% in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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