You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: - Today more people are travelling than ever before. - Why is this case? - What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
With the advent of technology and globalization,
people
have started travelling more as compared to the last
decade. In this
essay
we are going to discuss the reason why travelling is happening more nowadays than ever before and Add a comma
essay,
also
we will discuss the benefits travelling gives to travelers
.
Change the spelling
travellers
People
nowadays are more fond of travelling to various destinations with their families. Our ancestors do not used to travel
a lot as this
generation does. Firstly
, We now see that both the males as well as
females are going to work so that they can earn more money. So, People
nowadays have more money and so they spend that by travelling with their family members to various places. Secondly
, Today's generation is all about showing off. We are now living in the era of technology where we have applications like Instagram, Facebook and Snapchat and people
are curious to post everything and to show everyone that they are travelling to various places. To illustrate, People
now when they travel
to some country, the first task they perform is to post and will everyone that I visited this
place. You can go to their social media account and it will show all details of their travelling. So, the reason this
generation travels more is because they earn more and they are habitual of showing off.
I have heard from many great artists that travelling is considered as a best teacher. There are various philosopher who says it is very crucial to travel
two times a year. Travelling teaches you the true meaning of life. You get to know and meet new people
with different cultures and languages. Moreover
, when you travel
, you face various challenges and you face them that help you to build your confidence. For example
, when I first traveled to Malaysia last
year I got stuck in various issues like immigration, finding accommodation, language barrier issue which I resolved which boosted my confidence level and met new people
and I got to know about their culture and we shared memories. So, travelling has lots of benefits as we have discussed.
To conclude
, I would say travelling is a boon , especially for youth who are in their early 20s, they need to travel
more and more as it teaches you those lessons of life which no one can teach you. But, we should travel
to learn not to show off to others.Submitted by anash.suhail on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines the main points to be discussed in the essay. This provides a clear roadmap for the reader.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to proofread your essay to avoid small grammatical and punctuation errors. This will make your writing clearer and more professional.
coherence cohesion
Try to link paragraphs more smoothly by using transitional phrases. This will make the essay flow better and improve readability.
task achievement
Discuss each point in a bit more detail for a more comprehensive response. Providing more relevant examples can strengthen your argument.
task achievement
The essay covers both parts of the task effectively, discussing why more people are traveling and the benefits for travelers.
task achievement
Clear ideas are presented, and the essay addresses the task comprehensively.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and a strong conclusion summarizing the main points.
task achievement
Examples provided, such as the experience in Malaysia, are relevant and help support the points made.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.