You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to give my comment as requested by the school about the cookery

course

I did for a short period of time. During the

course

, I enjoyed meeting and interacting with people from different parts of the world as I got to learn a lot about various cultures.

Also

, I loved how I was able to learn about African food, how to prepare them and the hands-on practical experiments with different ingredients from different African cultures. With

this

, I am now able to cook using various spices from different countries. Since I started the

course

, I now find myself cooking two meals daily as my love for cooking has grown immensely. I live in a house with my sister and I ensure I cook for her daily, now I tend to invite my family over during the weekend so they can come to enjoy some of the cooking skills I learnt from the

course

. I would like to suggest a cookery

course

that focuses on Chinese cuisine. Of recent, we have had a rise in the number of individuals interested in eating Chinese food based on recommendations from friends and family. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Margaret.

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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