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The given process depicts how the waste paper is recycled.

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The given process depicts how the
waste
paper
 is recycled.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 there are 6 steps in the process, starting with
Waste
paper
 collection and culminating in
Paper
are
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manufactured by machine. Looking in more detail, first of all, the
paper
 emitted is collected from various resources, including public
paper
 banks and businesses. Having sorted the
waste
paper
 by hand, it is conveyed to
paper
 factories by trucks. Turning to the next steps, both stages 4 and 5 are involved in Cleaning. After the trucks have delivered to the
paper
 plants, these
waste
 papers are cleaned and pulped by workers before moving on
the
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 next step.
At
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 the following steps, the inks and glues are eliminated which is followed by De-inking. When the discard of inks and glues has been done, the
last
 step is when the
paper
 which is used for consumers is produced by the machine
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