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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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There are given three pie charts with several
aproaches
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approaches
of
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to
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 managing
with
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apply
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toxicand
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toxic and
 unsafe
rubbishes
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rubbish
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 in countries
such
 as
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea, Sweden and
UK
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the UK
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. It is
noticable
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noticeable
 that everyone has their own major variant to
have
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apply
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a
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apply
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deal with
wastes
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waste
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.There is an interesting detail
with
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about
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 dumping at sea
,
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apply
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because it compiles 8
percent
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per cent
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 of
UK's
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the UK's
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decision
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decisions
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 like
a
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the
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using
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use
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of
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apply
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chemical treatment.An immense piece of trashes are departed by
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the british
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british
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British
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goverment
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government
to
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apply
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underground and
this
 indicator equals
to
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apply
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82
percent
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per cent
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,
while
 only 2
percent
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per cent
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 of them is kindled.Generally, swedes
also
 bury their
wastes
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waste
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.Another half
hoes
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goes
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 to recycling and inceration
that
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apply
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has 20
percent
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per cent
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.The
koreans
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Koreans
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 have as in depicted
scandinavian
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Scandinavian
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 country three ways to cope with dangerous garbages.
Firstly
, recycling takes almost
seven tenths
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seven-tenths
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 and getting rid of to underground fracts another
one fifth
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one-fifth
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.The lowest 9
percent
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per cent
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 belongs to destruction by fire.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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