Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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era and age, bullying is an extreme issue
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our society, especially for teenagers.
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important issue has been pushed by social media and is becoming very common in
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as families situation and psychological traumas and the possible situations
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between teachers, parents and children or introducing a
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into
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. First of all, in every
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, especially in those public
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, there are children that come from
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different social backgrounds. Families and their social situations have an important influence on pupils and their behaviour. Studies have shown that bullies are more likely to be those who come from difficult familiar situations
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as financial or drug problems, where parents cannot be a present or a positive figure for their sons.
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figures, parents and bullies to
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and understand which could be the cause of
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behaviour and the possible solutions.
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, another cause could be psychological traumas given by the always more popular violent films and
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. Normalising
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type of attitude can lead to an acceptance and recreation of them by pupils, creating social problems among the young.
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research conducted by the
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of Cambridge shows that there are more than 60% of possibilities that
teenages
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teenagers
adopt negative attitudes.
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, introducing a
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into
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for support and help to young people could reduce the damages of bullying and at the same time give a conscious understanding of why
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are wrong and not tolerated by the community.
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, all the efforts made by
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could vanish if
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school
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pupils do not have positive figures from taking inspiration and example because
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represents only a small part of a daily routine for young people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bullying
  • Harassment
  • Intimidation
  • Diversity
  • Adolescent
  • Mimic
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Cyberbullying
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Awareness
  • Conflict resolution
  • Peer mediation
  • Consequences
  • Respect
  • Kindness
  • Open communication
  • Vulnerable
  • Buddy system
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