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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that improvement community service should be
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compulsory state for all high school
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 teenagers can benefit from doing voluntary jobs in communities, I disagree with
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 scheme of making
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 a program mandatory. On the one hand, I accept there are many benefits to doing voluntary
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,
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 practice can foster a sense of communication and improve their abilities to make friends with the external world.
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, these
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 can make progress more quickly working in an adult environment and can learn from these experienced workers by taking part in
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 charity
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, having
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 improved abilities to
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 and connect with others would help them adapt to society more smoothly. What’s more, if they participate in
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 kindness within their neighbourhood, they
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 become more competitive applicants when they apply for a job or a university in the future.
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,
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 kind of behaviour would alleviate the pressure on local volunteers.
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, I would argue against
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 proposal to force all
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 to be a part of
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 mandatory
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. These
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 are busy with their academic subjects and it is unrealistic to make all these occupied pupils join
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 unpaid service. If they spend their valuable time on these activities, their academic performance
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 be impeded greatly.
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, I still remember when I was preparing for my final examination in high school, sparing time to finish
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 by no means practical at that time. What’s more, requiring these tired high schoolers to finish
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 would lead to a counterproductive effect on these
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. In conclusion, I can understand the reason why people tip the balance in favour of community improvement
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, but I would argue that it is unrealistic to force all adolescents to do
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