the chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Presented for consideration is the bar chart illustrating
waste
collection by a recycling centre in the 4-
year
period between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in
tons
. In general, the
tons
of paper which was recycled are usually the highest for most
years
,
while
the
tons
of garden
waste
are
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always the lowest. The
tons
of glass and
tins
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tin
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waste
have dynamic in their changes through
years
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the years
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. Looking at
the
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tons
of paper
waste
, there was more than 50
tons
of paper
waste
were recycled in 2011. In the next
year
, the
tons
of recycling dropped to exactly 50
tons
which
less
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than 2011 5
tons
. The number of
tons
continued to drop in 2013, they grew again to 52
tons
in 2014,
then
reached the highest in 2015 with 70
tons
. By the
year
2011, there were around 48
tons
of glass
waste
had been converted,
the
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numbers
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of
tons
failed to 41
tons
the following
year
. In
next
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the next
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2
years
, the glass
waste
had
the
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steadiness in the
growing
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with around 48
tons
for 2
years
. Reaching their highest in 2015 with 52
tons
. Turning to the
tins
, in 2011, there were nearly 35
tons
of
tins
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tin
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waste
converted, dropping up to roughly 25
tons
the next
year
. In 2012 and 2013, there were 33 and 36
tons
of
tins
recycled respectively. By 2015, there were more than 50
tons
of
tins
had been converted. Moving to the
tons
of garden
waste
which had been recycled, there were around 32
tons
in the
year
2011, falling to 15
tons
in the following
year
. In 2013, the
tons
increased to 32
tons
of garden
waste
again. The
tons
in
the
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2015 were more than 35
tons
of
waste
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons, years, tins, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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