the chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Presented for consideration is the bar chart illustrating
waste
collection by a recycling centre in the 4-year
period between 2011 and 2015. Units are measured in tons
.
In general, the tons
of paper which was recycled are usually the highest for most years
, while
the tons
of garden waste
are
always the lowest. The Change the verb form
is
tons
of glass and tins
Change the noun form
tin
waste
have dynamic in their changes through years
.
Looking at Correct article usage
the years
the
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apply
tons
of paper waste
, there was more than 50 tons
of paper waste
were recycled in 2011. In the next year
, the tons
of recycling dropped to exactly 50 tons
which less
than 2011 5 Add a missing verb
is less
tons
. The number of tons
continued to drop in 2013, they grew again to 52 tons
in 2014, then
reached the highest in 2015 with 70 tons
. By the year
2011, there were around 48 tons
of glass waste
had been converted, the
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and the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
tons
failed to 41 tons
the following year
. In next
2 Correct article usage
the next
years
, the glass waste
had the
steadiness in the Correct article usage
apply
growing
with around 48 Replace the word
growth
tons
for 2 years
. Reaching their highest in 2015 with 52 tons
.
Turning to the tins
, in 2011, there were nearly 35 tons
of tins
Change the noun form
tin
waste
converted, dropping up to roughly 25 tons
the next year
. In 2012 and 2013, there were 33 and 36 tons
of tins
recycled respectively. By 2015, there were more than 50 tons
of tins
had been converted. Moving to the tons
of garden waste
which had been recycled, there were around 32 tons
in the year
2011, falling to 15 tons
in the following year
. In 2013, the tons
increased to 32 tons
of garden waste
again. The tons
in the
2015 were more than 35 Change the article
apply
tons
of waste
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons, years, tins, year with synonyms.
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