write a letter to you friend. you spent aweek on her place when you came back you realised you let your wallet here

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Dear friend, Hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to thank you for your hospitality. I had a great time at your place

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week. It was quite a refreshing experience for me. Thank you so much for inviting me and making me feel at home.

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, I loved the meal you specially prepared for me, I already miss the taste and flavour. The whole vibe of your area is so vibrant, that I could not wait to come back. Thank you so much for dropping me back home. So, when I came back home, I realized I forgot my wallet at your place. I remember putting it on your dining table but didn’t pick it up. I had my identity card in it. Kindly courier it to my place as soon as possible or you can send it to my office address as I spent most of my time there. Thank you once again for your hospitality. I look forward to seeing you soon with another great plan. Yours sincerely, Aiman khan

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

177 words

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write a letter to you friend. you spent aweek on her place when you came back you realised you let your wallet here

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people belive that museums should be free to everyone and not charge an entry fee. To what extent do you agree ?

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantageous of taking risks outweigh the disadvantageous?

Write a letter to a hotel manager to inform that you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel: Introduce yourself and the group. Tell about the business meeting. Inform if accommodation is necessary.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?