The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The given maps depict the village map of Ryemouth in 1995 which will be redeveloped at present. The left side is the previous buildings and the right side is the new development. Over the
periode
, both maps have no change in terms of the streets and positions of the Correct your spelling
period
area
. However
, many building
have been changed.
First of all, the farmland and forest park located on the northern side were destroyed and have been converted into a Change to a plural noun
buildings
sport
Change the noun form
sports
area
including golf and tennis. The drastic change also
can be seen in the south
Replace the word
southern
area
whose fishing port wiithin
the sea had been demolished. Correct your spelling
within
Furthermore
, the current development has built the appartments
replacing the fish market. Correct your spelling
apartments
In addition
, Hotel will be provided with a car park.
To summarize, although
some of
Change preposition
apply
natural
sources were removed and housing Add an article
the natural
are
increasing, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
however
the current village Add the comma(s)
,however
area
becomes more modern and can provide enjoyable and mesmerizing facilities.Submitted by rams212 on
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