The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The given maps depict the village map of Ryemouth in 1995 which will be redeveloped at present. The left side is the previous buildings and the right side is the new development. Over the
periode
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period
, both maps have no change in terms of the streets and positions of the
area
.
However
, many
building
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have been changed. First of all, the farmland and forest park located on the northern side were destroyed and have been converted into a
sport
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area
including golf and tennis. The drastic change
also
can be seen in the
south
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area
whose fishing port
wiithin
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within
the sea had been demolished.
Furthermore
, the current development has built the
appartments
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apartments
replacing the fish market.
In addition
, Hotel will be provided with a car park. To summarize,
although
some
of
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natural
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the natural
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sources were removed and housing
are
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is
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increasing,
however
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,however
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the current village
area
becomes more modern and can provide enjoyable and mesmerizing facilities.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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