The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the worldwide cell phone market evolution from 2009 to 2023 of the five main producer companies.
It is clear that
three brands grew their sales between 2009 and 2013, these are Samsung, Apple and ZTE.
In contrast
, the presence of Nokia and LG’s mobile phones in the market decreased considerably from 2009 to 2013. At the beginning of the period, the leading company was Nokia with global sales of around $450.
While
Apple , in the
last
position, earned just about $25 sum.
However
, by 2013 Nokia reduced its sales by almost $200,
whereas
, Apple was the brand with the highest increase. With incomes in the year 2013 over six times greater than in 2009.
On the other hand
, in 2009 the second brand in the market was Samsung with around $225. Which had significant growth by 2013, duplicating their incomes . With
this
rise, Samsung, achieved the value of $450, becoming the main brand
at the end
of the period.
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