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Some people think that governments should do more to help citizens to adopt healthy diets. Others, however, believe that individuals should be responsible for their own diets. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many
people
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 believe that authorities should assist citizens to have good meals
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 others think it is their duty to supply healthy foodstuff for their own.
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 essay should look into both approaches. Nowadays, finding a healthy meal is not an easy thing. Farmers use very powerful fertilizers for their farms to take large harvests and get rid of pesticides. First of ,all it is the government's duty to stop importing harmful fertilizers into the country,
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 it destroys all good parabens from the soil and provides poisonous for
people
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. In
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 we eat a lot of harmful cuisine by mistake, not only elders, but infants
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 eat them and invite unexpected diseases into the body. If the authorities take action to lay rules and regulations to stop
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 no one can break the rules.
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, there is the latest trend in growing organic fruits and vegetables. These are a little bit expensive, but we don't need to fear the quality of the foodstuff,
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 the reason that they are certified by SLS. It should be promoted all over the country, and without the help of the
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government we can provide our own healthy fare.
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 is only talked about fresh
foods
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. Despite natural ,meal
people
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 use to have junk and instant
foods
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. Ministry should take immediate action to legalize the expected quality of
foods
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. On the other ,hand community should be aware of their meals and avoid taking artificial dishes.
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, I think both parties are partially liable for
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 matter. Considering the harm of these
foods
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 government should lay rules and regulations as
people
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 should avoid buying.
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