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A Museum Near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary / unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary / unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter •explain why you want to do voluntary / unpaid work at the museum •describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful •give details of when you would be available for work

#museum #home #people #work #director #•explain #•describe #skills #qualities #•give
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that yesterday I read
on
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 the newspaper about the ad
which
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 you were looking for people to work part-time
voluntary
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voluntarily
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. I would like to work
some
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apply
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voluntary
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 in order to help our society. I am
linda
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Linda
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 Robertson and I study part-time
university
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at university
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.
At first
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of
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, I am thinking about working
at
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part-time
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 job as a volunteer for a long time.
Secondly
, I have much spare time so as to study part-time department.
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, I am interested in learning history and art because of
connection
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 with my specialist.
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addition
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 I can speak English fluently and operate
computer
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 fast. If you allow me to work there I will
pleased
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 with you. I look forward to hearing from you soon about
this
. Yours faithfully, Linda Robinson.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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