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The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years

The bar chart shows the percentage of people who have moved house either in last 3 years,between 3years to 5 years,not within the last 5 years
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The bar chart illustrates, the proportion of citizens who migrate their home within the
last
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 3
Years
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 or between 3
years
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 to 5
years
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, or Not moved residence within the
last
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 5
years
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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, within the
last
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 3 to 5
years
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, more
people
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 shifted their homes.
while
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, compared to the older
people
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, They are not moved their home in the
last
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 5
years
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.
To begin
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 with,
Firstly
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, As per the age, 20 to 29, 45
percent
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per cent
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 of citizens moved their shelter within the
last
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 3 to 5
years
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.
However
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, 33% migrated within the
last
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 3
years
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.
According to
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 the data, 22% of humans still living in the same place without any change in the past 5
years
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.
Secondly
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, The age group 30 to 39, almost have a similar proportion of the 20 to 29 in the case of 3 to 5
years
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 and within the
last
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 3
years
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.
Following
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this
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, 22% of
people
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 still stayed in the same place within the
last
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 5
years
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.
Thirdly
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, the 40 to 49 age group has the highest migration happened in the
last
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 3 to 5
years
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,
that is
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 55%.
Furthermore
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, within the
last
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 3
years
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, 31% moved their house and 14 % remain there.
Finally
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, 50 or older
people
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 could not leave their current place within the
last
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 5
years
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.
That is
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 about 42%. Only a few citizens moved their homes within the
last
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 3
years
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, around 17%.
Whereas
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, 41% of human beings shifted their home within 3 to 5
years
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, that is".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 5 times.
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