You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter ●explain why you changed jobs ●describe your new job ●tell him/her your other news. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___________,

#work #company #friend #●explain #jobs #●describe #job #●tell #news #___________

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Dear Elaine, I trust you are doing well. I know you're wondering why I left sky services my formal company and now walking with ocean facilities a smaller company. I have to change my job because my family and I relocated to a different city and walking with Sky Services was not possible anymore because we know ready to change my contract to a remote job.

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, I'm enjoying my new workplace. It is a start-up which I love because everyone is listened to and ideas are implemented. I work in the facility management department where we manage the assets and facilities of the properties in our portfolio. Their majorly residential properties so our clients at the residents. I

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enjoy it because it is my profession so I'm gaining more experience. In other news, I just completed my professional exam to be a certified manager and I passed. I received the email early

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morning and am very excited about it.

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would courage me to start my facility management consultation. I look forward to catching up with you more someday. Yours sincerely, Ramit

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

185 words

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