You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter ●explain why you changed jobs ●describe your new job ●tell him/her your other news. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___________,

#work #company #friend #●explain #jobs #●describe #job #●tell #news #___________

Dear Elaine, I trust you are doing well. I know you're wondering why I left sky services my formal company and now walking with ocean facilities a smaller company. I have to change my job because my family and I relocated to a different city and walking with Sky Services was not possible anymore because we know ready to change my contract to a remote job.

However

, I'm enjoying my new workplace. It is a start-up which I love because everyone is listened to and ideas are implemented. I work in the facility management department where we manage the assets and facilities of the properties in our portfolio. Their majorly residential properties so our clients at the residents. I

also

enjoy it because it is my profession so I'm gaining more experience. In other news, I just completed my professional exam to be a certified manager and I passed. I received the email early

this

morning and am very excited about it.

This

would courage me to start my facility management consultation. I look forward to catching up with you more someday. Yours sincerely, Ramit

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8 paragraphs

185 words

8.50

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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