The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The diagram reveals the steps for producing
milk
and its derivatives.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the process of Linking Words
milk
production involves 8 stages. The first to the third stages usually takes place on the farmland Use synonyms
while
the fifth to eighth stages occurs in the factory where the Linking Words
milk
is processed.
The animals are reared on the Use synonyms
farm land
where they Correct your spelling
farmland
feeds
on grasses which Change the verb form
feed
is
their Change the verb form
are
solely
source of food. Change the adverb
sole
Ability
of the animals to produce Add an article
The ability
milk
depends on how well fed.
The extraction of Use synonyms
milk
is done by a machine twice a day. The animals are positioned Use synonyms
onto
the machine.
The extracted Change preposition
on
milk
Use synonyms
are
taken directly to the refrigerator where it is stored temporarily to prevent sourness and bacteria growth. The refrigerator operates at a particular temperature that helps to maintain its quality.
Change the verb form
is
Milk
is transported via a Use synonyms
milk
van to the city for processing into consumable derivatives. The van must deliver the extracted Use synonyms
milk
to the factory on a daily basis.
On getting to the factory, the van offloads itself into the machine where it is processed into different consumables Use synonyms
such
as cheese, cream and butter. Linking Words
Milk
products Use synonyms
goes
through the pasteurizationChange the verb form
go
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