The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting the reporting the main features .

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A pictorial illustration of

milk

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manufacturing and its derivatives.

Overall

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, there are eight steps in

this

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process of

milk

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production.

The first step is

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the

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apply

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cow grazing which occurs on the farm. The cattle are well-fed till maturation for adequate

milk

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extraction.

Milk

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is collected twice daily using a machine, which delivers daily in a tanker to the

dairy

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. At the

dairy

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milk

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is converted to

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apply

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cheese, cream and butter.

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Also

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pasteurization and packaging

occurs

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occur

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at the

dairy

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However

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, the end process is the dispatch of the

dairy

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products, to the final consumer which is made through sales in the supermarkets and shops.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

104 words

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