The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are producede. Summarize the information by selecting the reporting the main features.

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A pictorial illustration of the milk manufacturing process and its derivatives.

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, there are eight steps in the process of half-and-half production.

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cow grazing which occurs on the homestead. The cattle are well-fed till maturation for adequate buttermilk extraction. half-and-half is

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collected twice daily using a machine, which delivers daily in a tanker to the

dairy

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farm

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pasture. At the

dairy

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farm

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nursery

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cream is converted to cheese, cream and butter. ,

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pasteurization and packaging occur at the

dairy

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farm

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garden.

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, the end process is the dispatch of the

dairy

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farm

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pasture products, to the final consumer which is made through sales in supermarkets and sho

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

111 words

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