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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps reveal the present look of the southwest
airport
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 and how it will look after some innovations and changes have been made
Overall
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, the future plan for the
airport
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 has a lot of new architectural features that aren't in the present look which has just a few structures.
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 with, the present structure has an arrival point and a
departure
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 area and
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 8 gates that surround the walkway. Moving on to the arrivals, the
passport
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control
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 custom is found here where all travel documents are checked. There is a security
passport
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control
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 office which has the cafe and check and these are in the
departure
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 areas. In comparison with the present structure, the proposed plan for the
airport
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 has a lot of new buildings, and ventures and the shape is like that of an aeroplane. The sky station will be surrounded by 18 gates
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 the expansion of the
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.
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, there would be two points of entry for arrivals which will contain car hire, an ATM stand and a cafe. On the other side for
departure
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, there would
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 be a dual entrance way unlike the present-day look which has just one,the cafe and check-in will still be available at the
departure
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 as it is in the present look,
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, there would be a bag drop section in it
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. New shops would be opened for buying and selling of goods and services by immigrants. The security
passport
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control
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 and
passport
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control
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 custom venue still remain unchanged which is at the departures and arrivals respectively.
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