The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related product are produced
The diagram illustrates the stages involved in the production of
milk
and other items related to it .
Overall
, it is obvious from the picture that eight steps are involved in the production of dairy products starting from the extraction of
milk
from grazed cows on the farm to the distribution of the end products to shops and supermarkets.
To begin
,
the first step is
the collection of raw items from cows on the farm with the use of a milking machine and
this
is done two times a day.
In addition
,it is stored in a refrigerator for preservation . Next from there, the tanker assigned for transportation conveys it on an everyday basis to dairy for processing. .
Furthermore
,at the dairy, the refrigerated
milk
is processed into cheese, butter and cream on one side and pasteurized
milk
on the other side. Followed by the packaging of these end products and
finally
distributed in supermarkets and shops for consumers to purchase for consumption
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