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The graph illustrates the amount of waste produced by three companies during 15 years. It can observed that over this period number for a and b companies hit the highest points.

The graph illustrates the amount of waste produced by three companies during 15 years. It can observed that over this period number for a and b companies hit the highest points.
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The graph illustrates the amount of
waste
 produced by three companies
during
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over
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 15 years. It can
observed
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be observed
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 that over
this
 period number for a and
b
 companies hit the highest points. Beginning with the growth figures in 2000
company
 A hit the highest
point
about
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of about
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 12
tonnes
.
However
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,However
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company
C
 accounted for 4
tonnes
 and experienced the lowest
point
 in 2000. From 2000 to 2005
company
 A
drammatically
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dramatically
 decreased to 10
tonnes
 of
waste
.
However
,
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the figures
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figures
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figure
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 for
company
B
 was 11
tonnes
 of
waste
. But,
company
C
 was around 6
tonnes
. Turning to the other sectors, from 2005 to 2010. In 2010
company
 A
didnt
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didn't
 stop
to decrease
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decreasing
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.
However
,
company
B
 started to decrease
drammatically
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dramatically
 almost like
company
 A. But,
numbers
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the numbers
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 for
company
C
 experienced the highest
point
 about 10
tonnes
 of
waste
.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
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company
B
 was 7
tonnes
, and
company
 A was around 8.
in
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In
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 2015
company
a
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A
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 slightly decreased to 7 and was almost stabilized from 2015.
However
, trends for
company
B
 hit the lowest
point
 about 3
tonnes
 of
waste
 and stabilized. And
company
C
 increased and experienced the highest
point
 about 10
tonnes
 of
waste
.
Thus
, from 2000 to 2005
company
B
 was the highest
point
. But from 2010 to 2015
company
C
 experienced the highest
point
.
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